It's called 'A Tight Squeeze', as you'll see why when you read the story.
It actually started out as a 200 word story for the One Word Challenge competition, on the Talkback forum of the writersonline website. The judge that month gave me some useful comments, so I did a rewrite of the first half of the story- a great improvement.
It's been a long month waiting, but it's wonderful to see even a short piece of my writing out in the world for people to read.
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| On target |
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6 comments:
Ha! Excellent! Love it - could easily make that mistake myself!
Great story, Carol - horrid things and so easy to make that mistake. Thanks for the warning in case I ever try to get into any!
Ha ha loved it, Carol! :-) x
Very funny - even with the squid-like thingy in the bath!
marion
Ooh - sorry - forgot to leave a comment on here as well as TB! Great story, Carol, and well done on getting it published.
Thank you all- Lizy, Marion, Teresa, Rosemary, and Linda.
It's amazing how the most unexpected items can make a story. :D
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